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Snowpaw
« Thread Started on Feb 16, 2008, 2:45pm »

Name: Snowpaw
Age: 6 moons
Gender: She-cat
Position: Apprentice
Clan: Skyclan
Picture: http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb161/mad105/twins01.jpg
Quick Description: White thin coats with blue eyes.
Appearance:

Snowpaw has a white pelt and a normal pelt for Skyclan. She is mediam hight cat with sharp claws and teeth. Also her eyes are a light blue. Her tail is long. She has a long toung.

Personality:

She is nice and confedint. Also she has a good nature. VEARY pretty. Not Death. She is smart and intelegent. Also she is a skillful fighter and a good hunter. Also veary gentel and has lots of Love for family and closest friends. Also she is veary adventurus. Also followes the warrior code veary well.

Kit History:

Snowpaw is a veary adventurus cat with a ton of adventures.One of her adventures is going out into the forest with her mother and getting to explor it for the first time. Another is when she got sepperated from her mother. But she got her back. Also when she was born her twin brother died.

Apprentice History:

On her first day of being an apprintec she got to see the boundrys and smell the smells of the borders. She also got to learn some fighting moves. The next day they whent out Hunting. So she got her first prey. Now it continues.....

Warrior History:

n/a

Deputy History:

n/a

Leader History:

n/a

Medicine Cat History:

N/a

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Other:

Can her warrior name be snowheart (if thats OK.)

« Last Edit: Feb 29, 2008, 9:20pm by luna »

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Re: Snowpaw
« Reply #1 on Feb 16, 2008, 4:21pm »

This whole thing needs to be longer, and she needs to have an apprentice history. 'just one' doesn't cut it. It needs to be at least 6 well-thought out sentences to be accepted. Also, check your spelling and grammer, I see a lot of accidents already.

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Re: Snowpaw
« Reply #2 on Feb 29, 2008, 9:20pm »

There I fixed it.

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Re: Snowpaw
« Reply #3 on Mar 2, 2008, 10:12am »

Still some spelling errors... and I think Appearance has to be a bit longer... not sure.

Misspelled words = SPELLED RIGHT

mediam=MEDIUM
toung=TONGUE
confedint=CONFIDENT
all your vearys=VERY
Not Death=WHAT?
intelegent=INTELLIGENT
gentel=DENTLE
adventurus=ADVENTUREOUS
followes=FOLLOWS
veary=VERY again
adventurus=ADVENTUREOUS
explor=EXPLORE
sepperated=SEPERATED
apprintec=APPRENTICE
boundrys=BOUNDARIES
whent=WENT

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Re: Snowpaw
« Reply #4 on Mar 13, 2008, 1:11am »

SORRY I CANT SPELL!

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